Had a blast a week ago in NY with dorque_wrench, tjonesyand midwifeonboard! Saw (my first!) two Broadway shows (Carrie Fisher had us laughing and smiling so much our cheeks hurt after two hours, and "Next to Normal" was really good). Walked the Brooklyn Bridge, watched some great TV, had some fabulous food and mostly just enjoyed the company of friends. Thank you, guys, for such a great time!

Rather a tough week since and I've really wanted to write, but just haven't been able to find the time or the inspiration, so I thought, what the hell, maybe I can kick start it with this meme. Stolen from lots of fun peeps:

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

A link to all my fic can be found on the first page of my journal: larsfarm77. The MA rated stuff is f-locked, but can be found at Survival Instinct.

Title: Echoes
Author: larsfarm77
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Rating: MA
Summary: Adama deals with the aftermath of New Caprica. This fic was written for the makelaurahappy challenge, prompt: make Laura happy not being dead.
Spoilers: New Caprica arc.

Huge thanks to tjonesy and somadanne for amazing beta work. Thanks also to snoopy0917 for structural salvation :).

This fic won the "Hotter than Hades" award :).

( Echoes )

Title: Watermarks, Part 2
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Warnings: Um, pretty much entirely composed of graphic sex …
Rating: MA
Summary: Written in response to missbevcrusher’s prompt “Colonial One Bathroom” for the loveintheloo challenge.
Words: Broken into two parts due to LJ posting limits. 1450 words this part.


Huge thanks to tjonesy and somadanne for invaluable beta help. Thanks also to snoopy0917 for helpful comments and the button for the end, and to melligator and flamingo55 for reading and making sure this worked :).

( Part 2 )

Title: Watermarks, part 1
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Warnings: Um, pretty much entirely composed of graphic sex …
Rating: MA
Summary: Written in response to missbevcrusher’s prompt “Colonial One Bathroom” for the loveintheloo challenge.
Words: Broken into two parts due to LJ posting limits. 3893 words this part.

Huge thanks to tjonesy and somadanne for invaluable beta help. Thanks also to snoopy0917 for helpful comments and the button for the end :D, and to melligator and flamingo55 for reading and making sure this worked :).

( Part 1 )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 1079 this chapter.

My undying gratitude to tjonesy, innealta, dorque_wrench, killabeez and katamaran78. I owe all you guys. Thanks to melligator for the use of the Mac.

( Epilogue )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 4871 this chapter.

My undying gratitude to tjonesy, innealta, dorque_wrench, killabeez and katamaran78. I owe all you guys. Thanks to TJ again for the use of the Mac.

( Burden's shared )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 1563 this chapter.

My undying gratitude to tjonesy, innealta, dorque_wrench, killabeez and katamaran78. I owe all you guys. Thanks to melligator for the use of the Mac.

( The Brig )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 4348 this chapter.

My undying gratitude to tjonesy, innealta, dorque_wrench, killabeez and katamaran78. I owe all you guys.

( Interrogation )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 2348 this chapter.

Huge thanks to tjonesy and innealta for amazing ideas and beta help, and my undying gratitude to dorque_wrench and katamaran78 for providing last minute grammar betas. I owe all you guys.

( Rewind and Pause )

Title: Full Circle
Rating: MA
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Character death (never Bill or Laura), accounts of abuse, torture and non-consensual sex.
Characters: Laura, Bill, Caprica Six, Baltar
Summary: This is a sequel to my fic "Last Words". It's a dark look at the aftermath of New Caprica. Slightly AU.
Words: 829 this chapter.

( Prologue )

People who were enjoying my unfinished fic "The Devil You Know" will be interested to know that the core of this scene was written for that fic. I'm so sorry I couldn't finish it. Feedback is always appreciated!

Title: Debriefing
Rating: T (for now)
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Summary: It's the middle of the night, and Laura is at the end of her rope. She finds Bill asleep on the couch. Takes place between 4x08 and 4x09 (so spoilers up to this point)
Words: 2322 in part 2.

Huge thanks to tjonsey and innealta for encouragement and amazing beta work. Love you guys.

Thanks so much for to everyone who left comments on the first part and for coming back for more -- I hope you continue to enjoy.

( Debriefing Part 2 )

Title: Debriefing
Rating: T (for now)
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Summary: It's the middle of the night, and Laura is at the end of her rope. She finds Bill asleep on the couch. Takes place between 4x08 and 4x09 (so spoilers up to this point)
Words: 2099 in part One.

This story contains a gift. I was relating part of the idea for this fic over the phone with my friend tjonesy. She responded with "I started writing that a long time ago. Do you want what I've got?". She assured me it would remain lost on her HD if I didn't use it, and if you've read her stuff, you know what a shame this would be. If you haven't read her stuff, go now. So, I happily accepted and set about writing another 17 pages or so to finish the fic. This is the result.

Huge thanks to TJ for the little gift and to her and innealta for beta work. Your help was invaluable.

Thanks also to flamingo55 and KappaOmega for notes and encouragement.

( Debriefing, part 1 )

Title: Between the Lines
Rating: T
Pairing: Laura/Bill/Kara
Summary: 4x2 spackle fic, Kara threatens Laura at gunpoint, leaving Bill with a difficult choice.
Words: 2563 in part two.

Thanks again to tjonesy and innealta for beta work. Love you guys.

( Between the Lines, Part 2 )

Title: Between the Lines
Rating: T
Pairing: Laura/Bill/Kara
Summary: 4x2 spackle fic, Kara threatens Laura at gunpoint, leaving Bill with a difficult choice.
Words: 3706 in part One.

Thanks to tjonesy and innealta for continued beta help, encouragement and ideas. You guys rock!

( Between the Lines )

Title: Surrender
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T (for the first two parts)
Words: 560 in part 2

Huge thanks to my betas tjonesy, innealta, and ellisandra for amazing work.

( Part 2 )

Click here for part 3

A post Six of One fic; couldn't resist.

Title: Surrender
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T (for the first two parts)
Words: 1606 in part 1

Huge thanks to my betas tjonesy, innealta, and ellisandra for amazing work.

( Part 1 )

Click here for Part 2

Well I did it! Tried to do a new layout for my journal by myself (scary, I know). I'm not sure I like the pic I've used for the fanfic section.

Check it and let me know what you think (or if you can help, LOL): here

Last one :D

Pure silliness written for the third Make Laura Happy challenge (with an airlock).

Title: Execution
Rating: T
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Words: 837

( Execution )